Here is a sample essay, written by a first-year student in a humanities course I TA-ed for a number of years ago, that is somewhat similar in form to the essay you are being asked to write on Brave ...

Here is the sample essay: Thesis: Ursula Leguin's story, The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas, fails to successfully defeat utilitarianism because the scenario proposed has little relevance to any real ...

The last chapter ties up all the loose ends. Francis is in the railway station after he has said goodbye to Nicole for the very last time. The previous two chapters showed how first Larry, then ...

There is clear reference to both assessment objectives. With more time, there could have been some discussion of where Alfieri fits into this point (see feedback to sample answer one).